Wow. Events escalated quickly and perfectly, from the drunken banter, to the game of truth or dare, to them getting sexual, and of course, to the rape. This is incredibly well-written, and heartbreaking. Not only for Sherlock, but for John, as well. It was difficult to keep reading knowing what was going to happen. Their characterizations and the way they played off of each other was spot-on.

Also, the things John was saying to Sherlock while he raped him were literally chilling to me. About always wanting Sherlock and not telling Mary. At the same time, I found the rape itself to be rather erotic, which only increased the creepy-crawlies I felt when he began saying those things. S: Well done.

I'm eagerly awaiting the rest.

BTW, I'm glad you stuck with the Non-Con as writing it as consensual would have been contrary to my prompt. Though, I'm sure it would have been amazing either way. :)