Anon #2 here. This was well written. I especially like how you handled the conversation at the end. Very much in character.
I'm also glad that you opted to write from John's perspective. My fill is from Sherlock's point of view. I wouldn't have had a problem if you'd written from Sherlock's perspective as well, but I think it's kind of cool that we've ended up with a pair of fics, one from John's POV and one from Sherlock's.
Re: FILL from anon #1: The Easiest to Heal (6/6) NON-CON
I'm also glad that you opted to write from John's perspective. My fill is from Sherlock's point of view. I wouldn't have had a problem if you'd written from Sherlock's perspective as well, but I think it's kind of cool that we've ended up with a pair of fics, one from John's POV and one from Sherlock's.