Well, I'm very glad you didn't repurpose it, and decided to keep it in-character as much as possible. This is exactly what I was hoping for when I made the prompt.

Haha! I understood why John was saying those things, it was just very unsettling and actually made the rape feel a lot less... well, hot, for want of a better word. Even though it was written from John's perspective.

I'm especially eager for the next parts, as the aftermath of such a colossal violation and betrayal is what I was really looking forward to reading. I hope that doesn't sound awful. :/

I don't really care if it takes you a while to get more parts up. I can wait. :p