Very much enjoying how you've structured it so he is feeling like he is more in control of the situation and coping with it through his arrangement. ( on a personal level, glad you made it his violin teacher... mine was kinda pushing lines like this too..though not this much)
Re: Dear John (part 2a/?)
( on a personal level, glad you made it his violin teacher... mine was kinda pushing lines like this too..though not this much)